THoughts on my start

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7oom573EFaM

Just looking for a little feedback. This is a 30m start I did bout 2 weeks ago. How does it look?

So fast I couldn’t see anything haha. Looked quick.

Hard for me to see, thought your arms were too tight in front.

Yea i was thinking the same thing. I need to work on that. Thx