yes, get a camcorder… seriously;)
or at least - try only getting like 10m, much closer in.
Why - pausing and it was a blur. Try some editing software also and try to either get Stills from the footage or put up in Slow mo - again try to only put up around 10m. 16sec of it was before you even ran (people get bored quickly…)
Just some suggestions. cant really comment on the run (blurry)